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"Always in Your Pocket"

Writer: Erin Fedeson
Erin Fedeson
May 22, 2020
1 min read

Updated: Apr 22, 2021

Created May 5, 2020


Family is a two-sided coin.

You can’t have the best without the worst.

You can’t hear laughter without the screams.

You can’t celebrate without mourning.

You can’t gain without something going.

You can’t love without moments of hate.

You can’t forgive without some hurting.

You can’t hug without some pushing back.

It’s a coin that’s always in your pocket.

Author's Note: This poem is a free verse where the rules of poetry are what the poet makes it. The rule I placed upon this poem is that they needed to have the same number of syllabus. In this poem the syllabus for each line is 9. Ironically, 9 is the number of companions in the Fellowship of the Ring and my lucky number.

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AdrianJensen
Oct 09

https://casinowithmastercard.com was open while I compared card fees, and it made the poem’s idea that family carries opposing feelings at once feel oddly ordinary, since a card can be convenient and risky depending on the moment. The nine-syllable rule was the part that stuck with me, especially the Fellowship connection in the author’s note, because it gives the lines a steady rhythm I would have missed otherwise. In my own family, a single holiday dinner can hold laughter and an old grievance at the same table, so the poem’s mixed-bag view rang true.

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